We need a friend (poem)   3 comments

Once in a while we need shoulder to cry,
once in a while we need ear to listen and every once in a while,
we need hands to hold.

Our hands are strong, our words are powerful, but our hearts are fragile.
Our hearts need friends, our hearts need love, so our hearts can smile.

Don’t be ashamed to cry…
don’t be shy.
Let your friend know what you feel…
let them see.

She needs, he needs, you need, I need, we need a friend.

Created by Mellati Deluna
P.S. All my writings are compyrighted. Do not touch!

Posted April 13, 2010 by Mellati

3 responses to We need a friend (poem)

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  1. If you need a friend Honey – then remember me and talk to me
    It`s a true poem, but one should not betray his friends!!!

  2. keep on writing dear .. u are good in it …

  3. Poem is beautiful! We want more of it!

    Spellings: “hour” to be changed to “our” in “but hour hearts are fragile”.
    “compyrighter” to be changed to “copyrighted” in “All my writings are compyrighter.”

    Once copyrighted is mentioned, “Do not touch” is superfluous!

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